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Wednesday, May 30, 2012

The Publishing Process: First Edits

Monday night, I emailed my edited manuscript back to my editor, the first of at least five rounds of edits complete. During the past few weeks, I went through Red and the Wolf three times completely, the first two looking for specific fixes my editor asked for and the third to make sure I hadn’t missed anything. Along the way, I learned a few lessons:

1) Combing through the manuscript took longer than I expected. So when editing, or writing for that matter, it’s always best to calculate in extra time, just in case.

2) No matter how careful you are, things slip past your notice, particularly when rewording sentences to cut down on a long list of words that should appear sparingly in a manuscript. Mostly, this took the form of verbs I forgot to switch tenses on when I altered sentences. I was very glad I took the time for a final sweep of the manuscript to catch as many as I could.

3) I work best under pressure. Now, I don’t want my life to be constant, endless pressure, but under a deadline, I have far less time for doubt and nitpicky fixes.

4) It feels so good to get that first round of edits back to an editor. At least for me, this is different from doing edits on my own. Then, I don’t know for certain if a story will even sell, so the dark road of uncertainty looms ahead and dissipates good feelings. Turning work into an editor who has already accepted a manuscript feels like real progress.

I’ll update again the next time something new happens in the getting published market. Until then, is there anything in particular that you’re interested in hearing about regarding publishing?

Monday, May 28, 2012

Of Blood and Honey by Stina Leicht: Read, Part 1


Before we begin, let me take a moment to remember and honor our veterans and all those who have fought for our lives and liberty.

Today, we begin our current read of Of Blood and Honey by Stina Leicht. I first met Stina Leicht at ConDFW in 2011 and was immediately captivated by her description of her first book, Of Blood and Honey. She described it as historical urban fantasy, a subgenre I was unfamiliar with at that time. Between the evocative title and the setting, Ireland during The Troubles, I had to check it out. The next time I was at Barnes and Noble, I found it and purchased it, and, in the midst of trying to move at the time, read the first three chapters, enjoyed them, but never had a chance to finish.

So, a year later, I’m returning to her book with eager anticipation to savor it and share the experience with you, my wonderful readers. Since, Stina Leicht has been nominated for the John W. Campbell Award forBest New Writer, and I have every hope she’ll win.

Until then, enjoy her Of Blood and Honey.

SPOILERS!

Chapter 1

We open this tale with Liam, a young Irishman, face down on the pavement with a British boot in the back and a gun to his head. About him, a riot is in full swing, and he’s been caught supposedly throwing rocks, only he didn’t throw any. When the riot ends, Liam is arrested because he won’t give the names of the rioters and hauled off in a Saracen, a British personnel carrier. But before getting pitched into the vehicle, he catches sight of an odd looking man with a red cap and pointed teeth, looking at him.

Reader Comments: This is a very visceral chapter. I know almost nothing about Liam so far, but he’s already sympathetic. And I bet the redcap, what I presumed the man mentioned at the end, is responsible for getting Liam caught doing something he wasn’t.

Writer Comments: Two things make this chapter feel very real. First, Leicht sprinkled place names and terms everywhere, things any Irishman in 1971 Northern Ireland would know. Second, she liberally uses sensory detail to heighten the emotions of the scene, from the cold gun against Liam’s head to the “peppery CS gas” and “vinegar-soaked handkerchiefs.”

Chapter 2

Kathleen, Liam’s mother, can do nothing to either find or free him. On her way back from church the next day, she spots Bran, her former fey lover and Liam’s father, in the churchyard. He begs a word, insisting it’s important, and after a furious spat, mostly directed at him, she agrees. He tells her that his war with the Fallen has taken a bad turn and that she and Liam must be very careful. Kathleen confesses that Liam has been taken, and Bran vows to do everything he can to get Liam home.

Reader Comments: A war between the fey and fallen angels is an intriguing twist, and, for all I may not agree with all of Kathleen’s life choices, her pain is acute and feels real.

Writer Comments: While the first chapter was partially an introduction to the world of 1970s Northern Ireland, chapter two establishes the supernatural background for Of Blood and Honey itself, the bits Leicht invented, in any case. However, this second introduction never feels forced or dull because Leicht wraps it in Kathleen’s emotions and the dialogue between her and Bran.

I hope this first segment of Of Blood and Honey by Stina Leicht has intrigued you. Join me next Monday for Part 2, where we’ll learn where Liam went after all. Until them, join me Wednesday and Friday for other forays into the speculative and life.

Friday, May 25, 2012

The Need for Inner Turmoil and a Weighty Past

This week, I started a book that riveted me from the start, but now, more than halfway through, I find it has long lost its luster. I won’t name the book because I wish to avoid bad writer karma, but, especially in light of Wednesday’s topic, I realize more how useful some sort of difficult past can be to a hero.

It took me a few chapters past the point where the characters started losing me to figure out why. I read scenes and knew I ought to feel much for the hero, but the distance between reader and character was too much to ignore. At last, I figured out why.

Even as much as the plot’s setup is interesting, the main characters lack troubled pasts. Certainly, they went through the normal parts of life, but I lost sympathy for them. Like Mary Sues, their lives were too perfect. Yes, they had experienced some normal sorrows, but no more than that before the plot began. I suspect, just as readers tend to dislike Mary Sues, readers also have difficulty relating to and enjoying a Mary Sue past.

Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Are Characters with Dark Pasts out of Tune with Today’s Fiction?

A few weeks ago, Linda Poitevin, author of The Grigori Legacy, asked for what others thought made a good “kick-ass heroine.” She was working on a post for Fade into Fantasy, which turned out to be quiteentertaining, but in the course of gathering suggestions, she posed aninteresting question: “Also, most kick-ass heroines have a pretty bleak background that they’re trying to either ignore or overcome, but recently I’ve heard this aspect called cliché. Do you agree? Is that kind of dark history important to you, or do you think it’s been overdone?”

Granted, there are quite a few heroes and heroines suffering from childhood trauma or guilt over past sins: Harry Dresden, Harry Potter, and Ned Stark to name a few of my favorites. Yet not all protagonists suffer so much inward trauma, though my current inability to think of an example says a great deal about how rare they are.  (While editing this post I remembered that Buffy Summers has no traumatic past.)

Still, the concept of the hero with a dark past goes back millennia. Greek myth alone teems with it; though, many a god or demigod didn’t let it bother them too much. Poseidon did not take it too personally that is father ate him. Hercules lost little sleep over the fact that Hera sought his death.

However, before we go further, let’s first look at how we might define a bleak past. Is it emotional or physical trauma that still affects the character? If the trauma occurred but the character has already moved past it or it does not affect them, does that count? Is it dark choices the character once made that for which they now seek to make amends? Is it as simple as a character losing a parent or sibling through natural causes? How much suffering or trauma must a character undergo to qualify for a bleak past?

Unfortunately, the answer to this ranges widely. I’m sure each of you has your personal opinion. In my mind, normal events, like the death of a parent or a few heartbreaks, don’t count. After all, these are natural parts of human existence. But when your aunt and uncle start locking you in the cupboard beneath the stairs, you reach beyond the ordinary. So for the moment, let’s define a bleak past as one containing extraordinary—as in does not occur in normal childhood or life—elements or one so fraught with heartache that no room remains for happiness.

To answer the question, I went through my collection of writing books and pulled any volume that dealt with characters. Not a single one suggested creating a dark past for a hero. Not one advised inventing secrets, trauma, or anything else for a protagonist’s background, which suggests that these elements are not necessary for great story or a compelling character.

Why then do authors include them? Why do some readers enjoy them?

The closest explanation I found was from Characters, Emotion, and Viewpoint by Nancy Kress. “As a writer, you want to create complex characters because they feel more real to readers. Readers know that they themselves are not simple inside and tend to dismiss or distrust one-dimensional characters. Of course, this depends on the genre you are writing. In some genres, such as adventure stories, the simple, all-conquering hero is fine. Nobody wants James Bond to have an oedipal fixation, and if he does, we don’t want to hear about it,” (page 51). Kress’s words suggest that the tolerance for a dark past varies by genre. Literary fiction is more tolerant than adventure, for example. I suspect this is linked to the level of character development a genre encourages. Literary is all about character, and James Bond doesn’t need layer upon layer reveled to remain totally awesome.

However, as genre is a convention created by booksellers for categorization and shelving purposes and so readers can more easily locate stories they like, let’s step out of that constraint. While genre conventions may influence choices an author makes in character development and plotting, they by no means define them. In the end, most authors are telling a story about characters they care about, genre conventions or no.

Outside of genre, we are left with broader strokes to identify trends. For this, I turned to character archetypes and combed through The Complete Writer’s Guide to Heroes &Heroines: Sixteen Master Archetypes by Tami D. Cowden, Caro LaFever, and Sue Viders. There are numerous resources out there on archetypes, but I like The Complete Writer’s Guide because it does an excellent job of viewing those archetypes through the lens of character creation and story, not as a literary device, but as an author’s tool.

As I poured through the book, I noticed that some archetypes are much more disposed to dark backgrounds than others. Consider these examples from that book:

The BAD BOY:Secrets from his past formed the BAD BOY. A BAD BOY grew up on the streets, even if he lived in a mansion. Families have provided nothing but pain and hurt for the BAD BOY. Perhaps they merely ignored him, but more likely his family abused or abandoned him. He might have been a runaway; living on the streets was a better alternative to what awaited him at home,” (page 11).

The LOST SOUL:An isolating event in his past defined the LOST SOUL. He might have been a normal child to begin with—maybe slightly solemn and given to introspection, but willing to smile and play with others. But a defining event isolated him from society, shaping this boy into the man he would become. Illness or injury kept him apart, or maybe it was the jeering prejudice of the other kids. Either way, his response was to remove himself, withdrawing to an inner refuge where no one could touch him … or hurt him,” (page 27).

The WAIF: The WAIF was molded by her sense of isolation. Sweet and unsure, this baby girl searched every adult face looking for the love she so desperately desired, but never found the answer in anyone’s gaze. She was an orphan, whether literally or simply because her family failed to give her the love and attention she craved. She never found a support system—which was the one thing she truly needed,” (page 77).

Even the descriptions hold sorrow. Comparatively, such archetypes as the CHARMER, the CHIEF, the SPUNKY KID, and the NURTURER come with a sense of goodness of life. The BAD BOY, LOST SOUL, and WAIF all needed painful events to mold them into their archetype. Such is not necessarily true for the others.

So perhaps, in addition to bleak pasts, readers grow weary of certain archetypes. Are archetypes, like subgenres, capable of coming in and out of vogue? Certainly, certain genres and subgenres encourage some archetypes over others. For example, it’s rather difficult to sell a WAIF heroine in the romance genre these days, and the era of PROFESSORS and LIBRARIAN in the science fiction genre has faded. Are we moving away from BAD BOYS and LOST SOULS? If urban fantasy is any indication, the current trend is toward WARRIORS and CRUSADERS.

What are your thoughts? Are dark backgrounds becoming cliché? Can archetypes come in and out of popularity, and if so, which ones are on the rise? What qualifies as a dark past, and what are normal elements of life? Do you like heroes with dark pasts? Does genre play a part in any of this?

Monday, May 21, 2012

Blood Bound by Patricia Briggs: Reread Part 8


We last left Mercy Thompson in search of Andre, the vampire who created Littleton, a vampire-sorcerer-demon, and who has plans to create another such deadly monstrosity. Too many people died and suffered for Mercy to allow that to happen. However, killing Andre will certainly result in the other vampires eventually slaughtering her in retaliation.

Today is the final segment of our reread of Blood Bound by Patricia Briggs. To catch up or review, check Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6, and Part 7.

Enjoy!

SPOILERS!

Chapter 15

For days, Mercy uses her ability to see ghosts to find the houses of vampires. At last, out of sheer luck, she comes upon Andre’s, but she doesn’t rush into murder. First, she prepares herself mentally, making a list of all those that died and suffered because of Littleton and Andre. Then she visits Ben, the wolf Littleton so traumatized that he refuses to turn human and tries constantly to commit suicide by picking fights with other wolves. With these fast in her mind, Mercy goes to Andre’s with her borrowed vampire killing kit. There, she finds two of Andre’s menagerie and frees them. The ghosts of the house show her where Andre sleeps and she kills him with a stake to the heart, cutting off his head, and setting him ablaze with the magical medallion Zee loaned her. When she comes out of the burning house, she finds the two she freed murdered by Wulfe, another vampire who is there with Stefan. Stefan covers for her, allowing the murdered humans to take the fall so Marsilia, the vampire mistress, will not hunt Mercy in vengeance. But Mercy cannot forgive Stefan, for even though his hand did not slay the humans, he is as responsible as Wulfe.

Later, at home that night, the news reports the destruction of Andre’s house as merely the act of transients living there while the owners were out of town. Adam comes and nearly pounds Mercy’s door down with urgency. After berating her a little, he just holds her. For all her earlier courage and crusading actions, she is still frightened. The only upside is that the next morning, the contractors the vampires hired show up to fix her trailer.

Reader Comments: It’s rare to hang in there every step with a heroine bent on murder, yet I was. By the end of this book, I had no illusions about the necessity for Mercy to kill Andre; though, I have no doubt Mercy will suffer serious repercussions as a result.

Writer Comments: One of the things Donald Maass says in his Writing the Breakout Novel Workbook is to identify something a character would never do and then find a way for them to do it. Mercy would never murder in cold blood, yet she does. Briggs not only brings Mercy to the point of cold blooded murder, but she brings us readers along as well. By the end of the book, after all the destruction, death, and suffering we’ve seen result from Andre and after his intent to replicate it, Briggs doesn’t have to try hard to get her readers entirely behind Mercy.

I hope you’ve enjoyed Blood Bound by Patricia Briggs. As usual, there are parts of the book I left out in my summaries, so I strongly encourage you to read it yourself. The whole series is fantastic.

Next Monday, we’ll begin Of Blood and Honey by Stina Leicht, a book that was just nominated for a Hugo. Until then, join me Wednesdays and Fridays for more forays into the speculative and life.

Friday, May 18, 2012

Researching as a Writer

One of my dangerously addictive joys during the day, when I have the time, is engaging with fellow writers on Twitter. K.M. Weiland is always a fun one. She often tweets writing questions. I don’t know if most people actually answer them, but when I can, I enjoy doing so. Her question on Tuesday was, “How much time would you estimate you’ve spent on research for your WIP?” (work in progress) When Amy Raby also blogged about research this week, I knew I had to put down the thoughts churning in my head on the subject.

One point Amy makes is that it’s difficult to research esoteric subjects. I couldn’t agree more, but I think the difficulty goes beyond that. The sort of details a writer wants to give a story living, breathing believability are hard to find in books. We don’t just want to know that a castle’s sally ports were small, so one had to duck going in and out of them (a fact I learned from John Wilhite, someone who has actually seen them, not a book), but we yearn to know how often people hit their heads on those ports. We want to know how it smelled, what the dirt under your fingernails felt like, how the water or wine tasted, and all those rich sensory details that are difficult to extrapolate from academic books.

And sometimes, much as we try, we have little clue where to find information. Amy mentioned an interest in elephant domestication. Like her, I might have gone looking for such information in animal books, but domestication is also a subject in archaeology. I would never have known that without happening to know several archaeology students.

Lastly, the time for research can turn into weeks, depending on how accurate an author wishes to be. As a rough estimate, I told K.M. Weiland that I’d spent 40 hours researching my current WIP. Honestly, though, that will certainly turn into much more. For an initial draft, I do basic research, enough to have a feel for my setting. Upon editing, I often have to do more to flesh out details and clarify elements of the story. Like Weiland, though, if I spend too much time researching, my fingers itch to write. Much as I love learning new things, at heart, I am a storyteller first.

How do you research? Do you enjoy it?

Wednesday, May 16, 2012

Fate or Providence: Counting Blessings

Supposedly, big things in life come in threes: deaths, births, marriages. I have some experiences, particularly with the first, that suggests there may be some truth to this. In any case, rain or sunshine seems to come in bundles or bursts.

I’d heard a time or two of aspiring writers getting contracts one right after another after years of struggle. Until now, I’d thought it a nice story that happened to a few extremely lucky souls, but little more. (The optimistic romantic in me, though, often dreamed of it.)

In March, my dear friend and critique partner, Jessi Gage, received a contract for her highland romance, Wishing for a Highlander, which is due out in January 2013. In April, I received my first contract for my paranormal, fairy tale romance, Red and the Wolf, due out in April 2013. Then, in May, Amy Raby, Jessi’s friend and a writer I’ve come to know and enjoy seeing online, though I’ve been rooting for her for over a year, since Jessi gushed over her fantastic novel, received her first contract.

The three of us getting offers in that short a time could just be coincidence, but I prefer to have greater faith and a more thankful spirit than that. One way or another, I could not have dreamt up much better of a scenario. Okay, I could. We could all have received offers on the same day with advances we could retire on for generations, agents begging to represent us, and preorders pouring in before we even signed our contracts, but I have to draw the line somewhere.

What the three of us have received over the past three months has been great, and I consider it an honor to share this experience with these two wonderful women and fantastic writers. Despite authors’ tendencies to be introverts, it’s an uplifting feeling to share in each other’s joys and triumphs.

I am thankful for the opportunity to publish, but I’m more grateful for these wonderful women sharing the journey with me.